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Hi Chloe W. I am Kayla from Mangapapa School and I am in Room 14. I really like how you explained that you came first. And the boys were very close to coming first. I also really liked the way you added some pictures of your day. How many goals did you guys get in your game. Good Job Kayla. Congratulations on your win.
Hi chloe, I really like how you talked about your football tournament. This is a very awesome writing piece that you did on your tournament that is very cool.
Hi chloe W. I remember the soccer tournament we faced each other. Maybe next time you could add more description about the tournament. I really like the soccer photos. By Alexis
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Hi Chloe W. I am Kayla from Mangapapa School and I am in Room 14.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you explained that you came first. And the boys were very close to coming first. I also really liked the way you added some pictures of your day.
How many goals did you guys get in your game.
Good Job
Kayla.
Congratulations on your win.
Hi Kayla have we meat...?
DeleteWhen you said how many goals did you guys get in your game what game do you men and thank you
Hi Chloe,Wow congratulations on winning the tournament. I really like how you added photos. I hope you had a great time.
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Thank you Ashmara and your school did gool as well.
ReplyDeleteHi chloe, I really like how you talked about your football tournament. This is a very awesome writing piece that you did on your
ReplyDeletetournament that is very cool.
Hi chloe W. I remember the soccer tournament we faced each other. Maybe next time you could add more description about the tournament. I really like the soccer photos. By Alexis
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe my name is Alice good job for coming 1st Mangapapa came 2nd maybe next time describe more about the tournament.I really like your photo.
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